Page 25, the Big Guys section. Minotaur is listed twice. Once in it's own slot and then again replacing Ogres.

Pg.53: Team Lists. The Khemri, the mummies stats look ... wrong, unles I'm missing something.

Page 2 Opening 2nd line: "For those of you are familiar with..." should be
"For those of you who are familiar with..."

Page 12 change the last sentence in the Dead! entry on the Casualty table to read:
The player won't be playing Blood Bowl any more unless he is raised to join another team!

Page 17 .. change this at bottom of 1st column ... this is what it says now:
"The first step in actually creating the team is to study the team lists (see pages 50 to 56)
and decide not include Human players because these players come from a different team list. which
you want to use. All of the players in your team must be from the same team list. So, for example,
a High Elf team may not include Human players because these players come from a different team list."
You need to change it to this:
"The first step in actually creating the team is to study the team lists (see pages 50 to 56)
and decide which you want to use. All of the players in your team must be from the same team list.
So, for example, a High Elf team may not include Human players because these players come from a
different team list."

Page 18 ... middle of last paragraph left column. There are two periods after:
(see the rules for Freebooters later)..
delete one of the periods.

Page 18 .. top of right column change:
"There are four Star Player cards included in the box, more Star Players can be found on
the back cover of this book."
TO
"There are four Star Player cards included in the box, more Star Players can be found on
pages 57 and 58 of this book."

Page 19 ... change Injury Time to read:
"The referee waits to allow for injured players and other debris to be cleared from the field.
If the receiving team's turn marker is on turn 4 or earlier, the game is held up so both teams
turn markers are moved one space forward along the Turn track. If it is turn 5 through 8, the
referee adjusts the clock to give the teams time to finish so both teams turn markers are moved
one space back."

Page 19 ... change first sentence of Perfect Defence to:
"The kicking team???s coach may reorganize his players ??? in other words he can set them up again
into another legal defence."

Page 19 ... change last sentence of Pitch Invasion to read:
"If a roll is 6 or more after modification then the player is Stunned."

Page 21 ... Did you know...
There should be a comma in "The High Elf team, the Dragon Princes,"

Page 22 ... Slow Motion Replay.
Is there anyway to delete the graph line after INTERCEPTION MODIFIERS so that you don't have a blank box.
If this is way difficult Josh don't sweat it.

Page 22 ... Slow Motion Replay.
Say "Per emeny tackle zone on" instead of "Per enemy tackle zone on"

Page 25 ... Delete this paragraph as it a repeat of the paragraph above it:
"Although Big Guys do occasionally play in all Big Guy teams, they are far more frequently
seen as members of other teams. It is rare for Goblin teams to take the field without a Troll
or two on the roster, for example, and there are many Chaos teams that include Minotaurs in
their ranks. Most ubiquitous of all are Ogre players, who have been know in their time to play
for just about every Blood Bowl team in the Old World."

Page 25 ... Title Cost MV ST AG AV for Beast of Nurgle need moved to top of column 2.

Page 26 ... Really Stupid red section change "voluntarily move" to "move voluntarily"

Page 26 ... Really Stupid change: "The player loses his tackle zone and may not catch the ball,"
to
"The player loses his tackle zone and may not catch or pass the ball,"

Page 27 ... left column 2nd paragraph, last sentence ... 2nd to last line should be:
"Blood Bowl, not a spell casting contest, so"
Note the comma after Blood Bowl

Page 27 ... Casting Spells 2nd sentence should be changed to:
"The Wizard may cast one of the three spells detailed on this page."

Page 27 ... Last part of Casting Spells paragraph should be changed to:
"after the Turn marker has been moved but before any players perform an action."
The ' in player's needs deleted.

Page 27 ... change 1st sentence of 2nd paragraph of Fireball Spell to:
"Make an Armour roll for any player that is knocked over as if they had been knocked over by
an opponent with the Mighty Blow skill.

Page 28 ... change last sentence of Necromancers section to:
"Liche Priests can argue the call with the referee and can still use his magical powers for the
team if ejected."

Page 29 ... middle of first paragraph change
"None the less, the use of" to:
"Nonetheless, the use of"

Page 34 ... Diving Tackle middle of paragraph change:
"then only one of the opposing player may make a diving tackle."
to
"then only one of the opposing players may make a diving tackle."
Correction is that players should have an s to make it plural

Page 35 ... Dodge skill last sentence should say in the middle:
"skill affects the results rolled on the Block dice, as explained in the"
The change is to change Block D6 to Block dice.

Page 35 ... Easily Confused, middle of paragraph change:
"In which case roll D6 again" to
"In which case roll a D6 again"
change is to add an a in the line

Page 36 ... Piling On change the end of the 2nd to last sentence to:
"then he must have followed up the block in order to use this skill."

Page 36 ... change 3rd sentence of Pro from:
"Once per team turn, a Pro is allowed to re-roll any one D6 roll he has made."
to:
"Once per team turn, a Pro is allowed to re-roll any one dice roll he has made."

Page 40 ... this sentence at the bottom of the first column midparagraph should be in red.
"If no remaining new skills are available for this player to take than the player may ignore the result
and treat the result as if doubles had been rolled instead."

Page 48 ... Chaos Cup Winning Table .. need a comma after Nurgle

Page 57 ... cannot see page number

Just be extra-careful for the front page: nothing worse than having a crisp, error-free content if there are some misprints on the cover!

If you find any ... please let me know. We are entering the final days of changes before it gets sent to JJ.

Galak

Add a page promoting the NAF to the LRB please